Immediate Feedback - Betareading

Beta-reading feedback – “Ces nœuds qui nous relient” (These ties that bind us)
Just like Suzette, I had the chance to cross paths with Emy via the Authors-Reviewers platform, which offers a beta-reading service. This partnership came at just the right time, allowing me to submit my novel to gather valuable feedback.
And what a wonderful encounter! 💛
Emy, also known as @lalibrairiescorpio, quickly offered to read my text and provided me with both kind and constructive feedback. Her comments helped me refine my characters' vision and strengthen the emotional consistency of the story.

I am so fortunate to have benefited from her advice and literary sensibility.
A huge thank you, Emy! 🙏

Here's an excerpt from her feedback:
“The flashbacks add intensity and depth to their relationship; they show that even in the past, they shared a stronger bond than they realized.
Sweetness is present in every chapter, but in this one it struck me: I loved having that feeling that the world had stopped turning around them.
A beautiful story, touching in the gentleness it emanates and in the emotional reflections of its characters.”